tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post114815386753796737..comments2023-09-12T11:00:50.100-05:00Comments on Prodigal Aspersions: Going BackCyn Huddlestonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16698496590225633741noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post-1149925874416561142006-06-10T02:51:00.000-05:002006-06-10T02:51:00.000-05:00This is a most incredible poem Cynthia. You made m...This is a most incredible poem Cynthia. <BR/>You made me follow you each step of the way. I had no will of my own. I can not help but wonder how many times while you were writing this poem did you stop and stare, lose yourself in that far away place and then come back?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post-1148378068371221562006-05-23T04:54:00.000-05:002006-05-23T04:54:00.000-05:00I admire the measured quality of detachment in thi...I admire the measured quality of detachment in this piece. The story is said -- beautifully laid out -- without the 'voice' breaking. And the impact is all the more felt. ^_^ Thank you for sharing this. Be blessed.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post-1148341847391293342006-05-22T18:50:00.000-05:002006-05-22T18:50:00.000-05:00A glimpse into the tragedies of life. Well written...A glimpse into the tragedies of life. Well written. *hug*<BR/><BR/>-nAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post-1148233465486148072006-05-21T12:44:00.000-05:002006-05-21T12:44:00.000-05:00I am still amazed that beautiful things can be mad...I am still amazed that beautiful things can be made of harmful, painful, ugly things. This is a beautiful poemIdle Pilgrimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15507734244794289696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post-1148191498854163462006-05-21T01:04:00.000-05:002006-05-21T01:04:00.000-05:00I REALLY like this one.I REALLY like this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post-1148189531843753272006-05-21T00:32:00.000-05:002006-05-21T00:32:00.000-05:00Good work, painful content.Good work, painful content.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post-1148188605462486302006-05-21T00:16:00.000-05:002006-05-21T00:16:00.000-05:00Cynthia, this one has a nice rhythm to it. I can f...Cynthia, this one has a nice rhythm to it. I can feel the tension. I wonder if one of the most harmful/painful things was that "nothing was said". <BR/><BR/>It sounds like you are far away from that place now...I certainly hope so.anniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14900362807680333144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27250202.post-1148179820628982052006-05-20T21:50:00.000-05:002006-05-20T21:50:00.000-05:00Gonna ask you about this one when I see you in per...Gonna ask you about this one when I see you in person. I like the set off "when we left" after the first stanza very much. Like the way it hangs out there, making your pause.Real Live Preacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03757644935379896122noreply@blogger.com