Did you ever want to be happy and grow up to be it?
Love this! The simile of Top Secrets and panties brought a smile to my face. And I love "Love poems/in code/written in my all over my face."
OMGOSH! I'm speechless!http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/stitch-in-timenapowrimo-10by-me.html
great...hey can't read all the poems posted BUT..soon as "poems like my panties" were before my eyes..of course I bacame interested. would be great title for your book of poems...keep writing
I enjoyed the simile and humor here.
I would call it awesome!A man, his fiddle and crows
I like it. The brevity works. Maybe bump 'eyes only' to its own line to keep your line lengths a little more consistent?
Love the last 3 lines especially.
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