Did you ever want to be happy and grow up to be it?
I lke the play of words here!gyrating on its own steam of oath
You did a great job with the transition. The depth of the subject stays in spite of the apparent simplicity
i agree simple yet deep....very nice
A lot of power in a few words--I especially like the way you ended the poem.
Feel free to critique the poetry. I employ a sophisticated thick hide technology.