Friday, April 10, 2009

Poems, Like My Panties

You will never see most of what I write.

Like Top Secrets, and my panties, they are Eyes Only
and the eyes meant to read them
do not need the words on a page.

Love poems
in code
written in my all over my face.
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7 comments:

  1. Erin Davis1:24 PM

    Love this! The simile of Top Secrets and panties brought a smile to my face. And I love "Love poems/in code/written in my all over my face."

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  2. Anonymous3:10 PM

    OMGOSH! I'm speechless!

    http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/stitch-in-timenapowrimo-10by-me.html

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  3. Wayne Pitchko3:39 PM

    great...hey can't read all the poems posted BUT..soon as "poems like my panties" were before my eyes..of course I bacame interested. would be great title for your book of poems...keep writing

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  4. Unknown5:36 PM

    I enjoyed the simile and humor here.

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  5. gautami tripathy9:26 PM

    I would call it awesome!

    A man, his fiddle and crows

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  6. Olorle11:18 PM

    I like it. The brevity works. Maybe bump 'eyes only' to its own line to keep your line lengths a little more consistent?

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  7. Danielle Filas8:31 AM

    Love the last 3 lines especially.

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